Revisions

[Jeff B]

I completely updated and revised (gutted) my care page on my website, I have attached a link below to that page. If anyone has time to read it, I would very much appreciate any feedback, suggestions, or constructive criticism ect. Thanks
http://gartersnakemorph.com/Care-of-our-Animals.php

[guidofatherof5]

Looks good Jeff.

[Chondro788]

Yep, I agree, lots of great info in there, and something everyone keeping garters should read!! :cool:

[RedSidedSPR]

Can't read it right now, but if it's anything like before, it's one of the best out there.

i.e., great.:p

I'll probably read it tonight.:)

[snakehill]

Very good!!! ;)

[Eddie]

The site looks great!
Did you ever get any babies from the Florida albino?
Ed

[Mrs N1ntndo]

I loved reading that and I found out some things that I never thought even to ask about. Thank you for writing that. It was very interesting to read. Thank you again....great job.

[Jeff B]

Thanks for the kind and positive comments everyone, but surely someone has something critical or suggestive or even a grammer or spelling correction or something for me. I didn't check it that closely???
I am also very open to listening to other veiwpoints or things that people think I should add that I failed to include or consider. My feelings won't be hurt one bit, nor will I take it personally, that's how we learn and grow

[guidofatherof5]

OK.
I thought the sections were a little long which might turn some away from reading them.
Is there anyway you can put some sub headings in to visually break the long looking subjects.

I still think what you have is great.

[RedSidedSPR]

I just read it, my thoughts exactly Steve.

Maybe separate a few paragraphs?? It was kinda hard for me to read, like anything not separated, but that's just me and my dyslexia-ness. Stuff like that's hard anyway.

But to patient readers with good eyes it's perfect as far as I can tell!:p

[Jeff B]

Thanks guys, thats the kind of honest feedback I was looking for. You know, I actually felt the same thing after I trimmed some stuff and combined paragraphs. I wondered if they became too long. I will take a look this weekend and see if I can break it up and condense a little more to make it easier to read. Thanks again for the all the feedback and constructive criticism.