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aSnakeLovinBabe
01-02-2010, 11:49 PM
After noticing in another thread Stefan mentioning our care sheet needing work....I just spent 3 hours going through our care sheet and completely revised it. Not just a few little edits, but full blown re-wrote the whole thing. It was lacking a lot of information and definitely needed to be cleaned up, making it easier to follow. I also felt it needed to be re-written in a manner that sounds more professional and less personal. I left all of the good information intact and simply added lots, LOTS more. I have wanted to do that forever and now that I did it I feel good! :D I will write something out for the breeding section later.

let me know what you think. I did not read through it all after finishing simply because I am really stinking tired! There may be errors that I missed and didn't correct (feel free!)

http://www.thamnophis.com/caresheets/index.php?title=Garter_Snake_Care_Sheet#Hibernatio n

guidofatherof5
01-03-2010, 02:46 AM
Thanks for taking the time to work on the revision.
It's much appreciated.:)

Stefan-A
01-03-2010, 03:05 AM
Well done, Shannon. Thank you.

drache
01-03-2010, 06:27 AM
excellent, Shannon
no wonder you're tired - it's like a small book

indigoman
01-03-2010, 07:08 AM
Clear easy reading,explaining why,what and how. A dummy like me can get the picture! Thanks for your efforts Shannon.

Mommy2many
01-03-2010, 07:13 AM
Thank you very much for taking the extensive time to re-write the care sheet for all of us. It is very much appreciated.